Do the write thing

Slide #2
Story: Dumping in Soccer field
Theme: The future of the Soccer field
Way to write about it: Question Akins staff, then the Soccer coaches to see how they were affected.

Slide#20
I can avoid this by getting quotes from differen't sides of the story, hopefully this will keep clichés out.

Slides#21-27
The second story was better than the first, because the first didn't have a story, it was all general statements about football season, fall, fans, and cheerleading. The second was about a single person and his experiences with a football team.

Slide#37
A good story:
tells the reader something new
explains what something means
reveals humanity, personality
finds the interesting point of view
Reflecting: As long as something is happening on campus, the reader will hear something new
As long as the writing is clear, definitions of things will be explained, people are always involved in theses, quotes reveal humanity and personality. And as long as its not very general statements it will be interesting.

Slide#44
Your story must be:
Accurate
Clean/Correct
Smooth
Clear
Tight
Unified

Clear: I'll try to make my writing informational and easy for everyone to understand, whatever that means